Tuesday, June 2, 2009

I'll Wait For You

I'll wait for you
with an open heart
without shame
my love pours out

With an open heart
blame not thee
my love pours out
like needed rain on the leaves of a tree

Blame not thee
for my hearts desire
like needed rain on the leaves of a tree
only you can put out this forest fire
burning inside of me

Vein of a feather I can not see
without shame
I await the day white birds fly you home to me
I'll wait for you

2 comments:

Becky H said...

I really liked reading your poem. I enjoyed the comparisons through out it and the aspect of being so open with love.
Good Job :)

Catherine said...

I liked how your poem flowed very smoothly. I didn't know what a pantoum structure was, but from what I read yours turned out very well. I think the line breaks give the poem a soft tone and texture relating to love.