tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post8972441786331406737..comments2023-10-29T05:01:28.321-07:00Comments on Word Paint: Just for Thrillssallylynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01257347406415098444noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post-43186414564979184012010-07-21T00:15:53.198-07:002010-07-21T00:15:53.198-07:00The most effective way to destroy your enemy is to...The most effective way to destroy your enemy is to forgive him, Ian. In this case, it is time for you to forgive yourself and restore your love for friends and family. You are loved; maybe misunderstood at times, but very much loved. Now get over your angst, and get on with your life!SOLUTIONS BY A PAIR OF DOCShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15629663325099202749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post-24872305207529401052009-06-22T10:59:50.244-07:002009-06-22T10:59:50.244-07:00Ian,
I liked your rhyming in this poem, especiall...Ian,<br /><br />I liked your rhyming in this poem, especially the one line with two rhymes in it. "I would gladly kill for just the thrill..." I also liked how the punctuation in the poem gave the perception of premeditation and not just emotional outrage. Very dark... it's nice to be able to step in someone else's mind and write from another point of view. I had a lot of fun with it on the second blog poem. Or maybe we're both just sick and twisted... who knows? Either way great job on the poem!drewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08629144345515415636noreply@blogger.com