tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post4109716059044908110..comments2023-10-29T05:01:28.321-07:00Comments on Word Paint: Cigarettessallylynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01257347406415098444noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post-74746342491674978372009-06-22T11:43:39.737-07:002009-06-22T11:43:39.737-07:00I really like this poem! GREAT imagery and metaph...I really like this poem! GREAT imagery and metaphors, "a parcel of death waiting," Wow. Also your line breaks keep me reading, especially the line "A toast" I find that very artistic. Job Well done!Jordan Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03845400846702504607noreply@blogger.com