tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post1485013083477886502..comments2023-10-29T05:01:28.321-07:00Comments on Word Paint: Groundedsallylynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01257347406415098444noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post-86415263322536821382009-06-22T10:50:13.115-07:002009-06-22T10:50:13.115-07:00Really good job with imagery here. I see a person ...Really good job with imagery here. I see a person exhausted and collapsong in a field of flowers. I also like the second stanza "where I've ben and when I will be found" It feels like this person doesn't want to be found and just wants to breathe.Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14493216645302780096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post-81250603576383451712009-06-22T07:07:35.292-07:002009-06-22T07:07:35.292-07:00I loved the imagery in your poem! Even if I had no...I loved the imagery in your poem! Even if I had not seen the picture I could see the flowers and colors so clearly! The words flowed nicely too! Good job!Tiffany Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11553519063939668162noreply@blogger.com