tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post1440873404550412363..comments2023-10-29T05:01:28.321-07:00Comments on Word Paint: Detachmentsallylynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01257347406415098444noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7242991642154434734.post-61330696233999979472009-06-22T06:17:17.622-07:002009-06-22T06:17:17.622-07:00I really like the way this poem flows. Generally,...I really like the way this poem flows. Generally, I hate poems that rhyme, but the way you do it comes with ease. It doesn't feel forced. It creates a poem with an excellent flow. I love the line "the silence is deafening shrieking in my ear." It is a really wonderful image. Great work!Ashley Bontragerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02142150237532671801noreply@blogger.com